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Jim
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Thats it, the event that a few of you had been waiting for, you were upset about the cliffhanger that went with my picture before.
Razing Hell (los angeles)
{{{{ Alex looked over the rim of the world into the lake of fire. "They had all gone mad, he thought, by why? And why not him?" There was a noise behind Alex, he reached for his knife and turned around... }}}}
Please go look at the picture now, much more of the story has been revealed, and I'm willing to bet its not what you thought it would be. Please read the "about me" section for a longer version of the picture description, and watch the whole playback, you might see some similarities in the creation of the original picture, and the second one.
Note: the even displayed in the new picture does NOT happen immediately after "Razing Hell (Los Angeles)" but rather nearer to the end.
Please comment, even if you already have, I would like to know what you think. |
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Khym Nga
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| it's amazing. are you continuing? |
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Jim
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| | Posted on 01-03-2007 02:16 | |
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Actually yes, heh, I don't think I can do anymore major changes to the picture, maybe some alterations, but I actually started writing the story behind it. I'll probably post it on my deviantart, chapter by chapter, maybe even start a thread here, or use this one, since the story and the picture complete each other.
By the way, for the people who didn't see the original picture "Razing Hell(Los Angeles)" before I changed it, Let me offer a brief description.
The picture is of los angeles, completely burning, and its supposed to be being overlooked at "the rim of the world", a place/school up by lake arrowhead. And this is the story that went along with the flaming city picture.:
*****Alex stared in horror, the city burning in front of him. He had never really liked Los Angeles, but it had been his home for the past four years. Reguardless it’s never pleasant to see your home burned to the ground right in front of your eyes.
“They had all gone mad!” Alex thought as he look over the rim of the world into the lake of fire. “But why? And why not him?” A low snarl from behind startled him, Alex reached for his knife…******
This is actually how the story starts in chapter one. The story is very likely to include a bit of violence, but I'll try to limit the foul language
Please show the picture/story to your friends, and/or comment on it yourself, I really appreciate and need the feedback! |
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Jim
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| | Posted on 01-03-2007 03:34 | |
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ok! its done! I'm so exited, chapter 1 is complete!
[url]http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49868469/?&q=by%3Awulf-krieger&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps[/url]
Please check it out! |
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Gwennie
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| I shall certainly do so! Your picture has intrigued me... |
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Jim
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| | Posted on 03-03-2007 21:24 | |
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I got an idea a little while ago to, rather than just have it be a literary piece attatched to my OMM picture, why don't I make it more interesting?
What I plan to do, is have multple pictures that go along with the scene, and have them being displayed while a person reads the actual story out loud. Like a movie, only the pictures themselves aren't technically moving. Of course I intend to add background music, and find someone with a good narrating voice, otherwise I might have to read it outloud myself.
I originally thought that I would draw pictures corresponding to each scene in the story, but I take a long time to draw anything worthwhile. So I thought, what if I have other people do it to show what they see when they read the scene? I could have them email me the pictures, or a link to them, and I could use them and give them credit in the end of each "episode"
Seeing as how my story isn't exactly well known yet (only the first chapter being done and all) I doubt there are that many people who have pictures in their minds that jump out at them when they read the story.
Anyways, I'm rambling, I'll try to put up more of the story, chapter 1 was kind of slow for introduction's sake, but it will pick up really quickly. If for some reason you DO like the story and want to show me what you see when you read it I would be enthralled to see it, and possibly even use it to make a narrative version of the story. Please send it to my deviant art account, 'cause I still can't get the messaging to work right.
P.S. In the credits of each episode I intend to include acknowledgements for any artist contributations, and "story derived from (enter final picture title here) by Isaac on www.TheOneMillionMasterpiece.com" Hopefully this will help to generate additional interest in this project. |
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Jim
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| | Posted on 03-03-2007 22:46 | |
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Chapter 2 is now up on my deviant art web page. This one is a LOT more interesting. WARNING: some violence!
Still, if you peoples have pictures that go with the story, please let me know, and suggestions for the story, or my OMM picture, or anything like that. |
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Jim
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| | Posted on 09-03-2007 08:56 | |
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| oh, in case any of you were following, I've uploaded up to chapter 3, i'm open to criticizm on the story, the picture, and the relation between. The story is actually pretty popular at my school, and people keep pestering me to write another chapter. This will be cool if I actually manage to stay focused enough to finish it. |
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Jim
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| | Posted on 18-03-2007 00:57 | |
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Chapter 4 is now up, It's taken a while to write it on account of the school projects I keep getting.
but its up there nonetheless. Um, chapter 3 is kinda trippy, but 4 is interesting, you get to meet 2 new characters. I PROMISE these characters will be intricate and interesting. I already have their backstory in my head, I just need to write it down. |
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Jim
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| | Posted on 15-04-2007 04:56 | |
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| Chapter 5 is up. although i initially uploaded it as chapter 4, I was kinda confused as to why there were 2 chapter 4's for a while, But I fixed it. |
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