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Matt Kaiser
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I'm sure I can edit it further, but this is what I have for now. It was my first attempt at drawing anything with my laptop trackpad. I find it easier than using a mouse.  |
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Matt Kaiser
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| | Posted on 16-01-2007 03:17 | |
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| Edited my piece with a title in case anyone wants to take a look. |
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Allison Dollar
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Hmm... The eye is really striking. I like it without the title better I think, but it doesn't bug me enough for me to suggest removing it.
I love the colors. I think that's my favorite part  |
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Sin-Mae Chung
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 | | Posted on 16-01-2007 10:14 | |
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| i commented already. but that was b4 u edited.. but i must say that i agree with allison.. i like it better without the title aswell. some how i liked the sort of background u created underneath the word.. and then i kinda find it distracting, sort of drawing my attention away from the main focus of the painting.. maybe a different, lighter may have lessened that dominating effect? the word blind definately makes it obvious of what you were trying to convey.. and i actually found that even without the title i managed to pick that up already.. but anyways.. the font/writing style is kool.. i dig the dots mimiking that blood.. since its black it sorts of reminds me of them images of cartoon flies.. and how they are portrayed as filthy and having these little black filth stuff fly off them everytime they move haha.. can kinda imagine it move.. but im weird. |
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Matt Kaiser
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| | Posted on 16-01-2007 11:22 | |
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| I could always remove it, do you really think I should? |
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Allison Dollar
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| | Posted on 16-01-2007 11:24 | |
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I think so. There's just so much space that you've managed to create with those beautiful colors.. and the word just sorta flattens the space back out.
But it is up to you. |
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Emm
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 | | Posted on 16-01-2007 12:12 | |
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| Hey, that's a pretty wicked eye.... *rates* |
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Sin-Mae Chung
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| | Posted on 16-01-2007 13:03 | |
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| uh huh.. yeah i think removing the lettering would open it much more.. would love to see that lovely background again and allison made a good point about the flattening of the space.. but b4 u go on deleting. what do u reckon? |
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Matt Kaiser
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| | Posted on 17-01-2007 02:49 | |
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| i just wanted to fill the space, it felt empty, and with a square that small you need something to draw attention. |
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Matt Kaiser
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| | Posted on 17-01-2007 03:29 | |
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| Well i'm beginning to agree, i'm taking out the text. You can still catch it on the playback. |
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Sin-Mae Chung
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| | Posted on 17-01-2007 10:45 | |
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| oh i believe u can just easily erase it using the undo button.. amazing they system saves every stroke and therefor u can delete them even after saving it.. but then again if u did changes to any other place that u want to keep then it is a good idea to just paint over.. but yea.. i feel having the space above open is great.. more space to breathe dont u think? |
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Matt Kaiser
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| | Posted on 17-01-2007 11:30 | |
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| Oh heh, didn't even try. But the background looks better than ever, so it's fine. |
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Sin-Mae Chung
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| | Posted on 17-01-2007 22:05 | |
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| sweet as long as ur happy with it.. i mean in the end u do need to please urself. |
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Matt Kaiser
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| | Posted on 17-01-2007 22:37 | |
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| That I do. =P I may add a couple things now and then and then cover them up, just for fun. |
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Pablo Linietsky
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 | | Posted on 17-01-2007 23:20 | |
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I really like your Eye Matt... it reminds me an old PS game.
Saludos. |
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Matt Kaiser
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| | Posted on 17-01-2007 23:27 | |
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| The only eye I can think of from PS is the Inevitable logo on Tony Hawk. |
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Pablo Linietsky
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| | Posted on 17-01-2007 23:29 | |
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That is Matt!!! I knew it was something like that... Anyway i think this
one is better...
Saludos... |
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Matt Kaiser
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| | Posted on 17-01-2007 23:54 | |
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| Thanks! I'm glad you like it! |
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Matt Kaiser
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| | Posted on 20-01-2007 19:57 | |
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| Come on, just one more rating, I want to reach 50. |
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Sin-Mae Chung
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| | Posted on 21-01-2007 01:13 | |
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| oooo already hitting 50.. niiiiiice |
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